A New Collection Review: Interconnected Narratives of Pain

Twelve-year-old Freya spends time with her self-absorbed mother in Cornwall when she comes across teenage twins. "The only thing better than being aware of a secret," they tell her, "comes from possessing one of your own." In the time that come after, they will rape her, then bury her alive, a mix of anxiety and irritation darting across their faces as they ultimately free her from her makeshift coffin.

This might have stood as the disturbing focal point of a novel, but it's just one of multiple horrific events in The Elements, which gathers four novellas – published distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters negotiate past trauma and try to find peace in the current moment.

Controversial Context and Subject Exploration

The book's publication has been clouded by the addition of Earth, the subsequent novella, on the candidate list for a significant LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, nearly all other nominees withdrew in objection at the author's controversial views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.

Discussion of gender identity issues is not present from The Elements, although the author touches on plenty of major issues. Anti-gay prejudice, the impact of traditional and social media, family disregard and sexual violence are all examined.

Four Accounts of Suffering

  • In Water, a sorrowful woman named Willow relocates to a secluded Irish island after her husband is imprisoned for horrific crimes.
  • In Earth, Evan is a soccer player on trial as an accessory to rape.
  • In Fire, the mature Freya manages revenge with her work as a doctor.
  • In Air, a dad travels to a memorial service with his adolescent son, and considers how much to reveal about his family's past.
Suffering is accumulated upon pain as hurt survivors seem doomed to bump into each other continuously for all time

Interconnected Stories

Relationships proliferate. We initially encounter Evan as a boy trying to flee the island of Water. His trial's jury contains the Freya who returns in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, works with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Supporting characters from one narrative return in homes, pubs or courtrooms in another.

These plot threads may sound complex, but the author is skilled at how to drive a narrative – his earlier successful Holocaust drama has sold many copies, and he has been rendered into many languages. His businesslike prose sparkles with gripping hooks: "ultimately, a doctor in the burns unit should know better than to toy with fire"; "the initial action I do when I arrive on the island is modify my name".

Personality Portrayal and Storytelling Strength

Characters are portrayed in brief, effective lines: the compassionate Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at war with her mother. Some scenes ring with sad power or observational humour: a boy is punched by his father after urinating at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour exchange jabs over cups of watery tea.

The author's ability of carrying you completely into each narrative gives the reappearance of a character or plot strand from an previous story a real thrill, for the initial several times at least. Yet the cumulative effect of it all is dulling, and at times practically comic: pain is accumulated upon trauma, coincidence on chance in a bleak farce in which damaged survivors seem destined to meet each other continuously for eternity.

Conceptual Depth and Concluding Evaluation

If this sounds not exactly life and resembling purgatory, that is element of the author's point. These hurt people are burdened by the crimes they have endured, stuck in routines of thought and behavior that stir and spiral and may in turn harm others. The author has discussed about the effect of his own experiences of harm and he describes with compassion the way his cast navigate this dangerous landscape, striving for treatments – isolation, cold ocean swims, resolution or bracing honesty – that might provide clarity.

The book's "elemental" concept isn't extremely informative, while the brisk pace means the examination of gender dynamics or social media is mainly superficial. But while The Elements is a defective work, it's also a thoroughly accessible, trauma-oriented chronicle: a welcome response to the typical obsession on detectives and criminals. The author demonstrates how trauma can run through lives and generations, and how years and compassion can silence its reverberations.

Joseph Morgan
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